tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33019812.post5677624969482180216..comments2024-01-15T05:26:06.518+00:00Comments on THOUGHTS OF XANADU: When my Lover will comeKubla Khanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11973223751363547679noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33019812.post-19945084743498749822013-05-24T11:09:43.146+01:002013-05-24T11:09:43.146+01:00Exquisite! The most potent is the last stanza, es...Exquisite! The most potent is the last stanza, especially: <br /><br />"will hide all the awkward din of my awkward heart<br />as I will touch each strand of her long brown hair<br />and tie her hair and myself in knots."<br /><br />As if you too are a strand of her long brown hair, which you touch languorously, as you tie into a knot: her hair and yourself. Lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33019812.post-58136389384343678702011-03-03T11:06:35.992+00:002011-03-03T11:06:35.992+00:00wonderful. really enjoyed your poems today.wonderful. really enjoyed your poems today.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33019812.post-75427148263080070252010-12-09T17:15:07.577+00:002010-12-09T17:15:07.577+00:00that would be an undeserved honour!that would be an undeserved honour!Kubla Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11973223751363547679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33019812.post-75184695633698892662010-12-07T22:33:51.835+00:002010-12-07T22:33:51.835+00:00this is so beautiful - i also remained tied in the...this is so beautiful - i also remained tied in the knot of those two ending lines - i think i might borrow them for the Bridge, sometime!Roxanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05650840495095863057noreply@blogger.com